ASSIGNMENT 1 (CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY)

                       CAUSE AND EFFECT ESSAY OUTLINE
                                       (HAZE PROBLEM)

I. Introduction
   A) Hook/Attention getter: Our earth has its right to stay in peace but,
        environmental pollution that caused by human population's is
        so terrible and the efforts that has been made was not so effective.
   B) General Statement:  Nowadays, one of the continuous human 
        impact on environmental is haze, because haze form one of the 
        serious pollution that can travel thousands of miles from where
        it originated and was indirectly spread severe air pollution problems
        to the nearby countries.
   C) Thesis Statement: Low alertness and affection towards environmental
        problems can caused haze, so this issue will give rise towards many
        serious health problems towards human.
II. Body
    A) Topic Sentence: Human's poor awareness toward environmental 
        issues that can cause a chronic air pollution problems will contributed
        to the haze problems.
           1) Supporting Point 1:  Haze is an uninvited things that results from 
            open burning activities by human that produced large amount of 
            smog and released directly into the air.
             a) Sub-supporting Point 1: Yearly, haze that occured in our country, 
              Malaysia, are perilous during drought as winds that blowed carry 
              along an ample of smoke from fires originated from an island 
              in Indonesia called Sumatra.(BBC News, 2015)
              b) Sub-supporting Point 2: Open burning that being done by human 
              or farmers in Indonesia caused haze. Farmers in Indonesia will use burning
              method to clear land for the next plantation.
         2) Supporting Point 2: Hence,haze problem currently worst due to domestic source factor that 
         emerged by human daily activities.(Noor,2104)
             a) Sub-supporting Point 1: Haze were concentrated in huge modern areas because it has the most
                frequent industrial and aconomical activities compared to villages area.
                    i) Sub- sub-supporting Point 1: Haze was serious alarming issues in city as its lack rainfall and 
                    will cause things such as gas, dust,ash and tiny particles that comes from human's daily 
                    product to constantly float in the atmosphere rather than fall back to Earth.
    B)  Transition Paragraph:
        1) Summary/Conclusion: Haze crisis was an alarming current issues in our world due to
         low human awareness towards environment, especially on the quality of the air.
         2) Transition Sentences: Haze that has been caused by human did returned brings bad effect back 
         to themself.
   C) Topic Sentences: Haze issue must be curb us at faster rate and there should be several precautions
      to be applied as haze can cause many serious health problems towards human..
        1) Supporting Point 1:  Haze was an air that consist of many particular matter that can penetrate deep into 
         our lungs and can potentially effect our health status.(Palanisammy,A,2013)

          a)Sub-supporting point 1:  Abnormal respiratory symptom,cardiovascular effect and ophtalmic effects was

              an effect from long exposured toward haze.( Finlay,S.E,Moffat,A,Gazzard,R,Baker,D,Murray,2012)

      2) Supporting Point 2:Kids was totally at risk during haze because their immune system was still immature . 

            a) Sub-suporting point 1:Kid's body are protected by antibodies as their body defences against pathogen
            exits only after having vaccination at certain age,hence easily infected by desease that was spread easily
            in hazy environment.
III.Conclusion
        A) Restate of thesis statement:  Haze issue are caused by poor society awareness about air quality 
        and eventually lead to many serious health problem to arise.
        B) Suggestion:  Goverment should apply a strict international laws that will prohibit any country from
        pollute the environment with haze.
IV. References:
1) -BBC News, (2015), Indonesia haze child evacuation plan prepared.
    -Retrieved from:http://www.bbc.com/news/world-asia-34612922
2)-Sing Health,(2015),KK,Women's and Children Hospital
   -Retrieved from:http://www.healthxchange.com.sg/healthyliving/childrenhealth//pages/children-and-the-haze-in-singapore.aspx
3)-Finlay,S.E,Moffat,A,Gazzard, R, Baker, D,Murray(2012), Health impact of wildfires, U.S National
     Library of Medicine National Institutes of Health
   - Retrieved from: http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3492003/
4)- Noor,A.A,(2014),Domestic factor causing haze in malaysia
   - http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC3492003/
5)-Palanissamy,A.(2013).Haze free air in Singaporeand Malaysia the spirit of  the law in South East  
    Asia. International Journal of Education and Research 1,8, 1-8.