Monday 7 December 2015

Process of writing and organizing an essay.


               

             CHOCOLATE

                    1st step

STORY:
-All of us really loves to eat chocolate. We can get chocolate everywhere, at the store,supermarket or even in our cereal. It would make me feel bad if I could not get even a bite of chocolate in a day.
WHAT I WANT TO WRITE ABOUT:
-Chocolate cravings is by far the most common food item that is craved, and this is particularly true in women.
                  2nd step
-Chocolate doesn’t make the world go around but it certainly makes the ride worthwhile.(Hook) 
-Pure chocolate is a products that contains cocoa butter and cocoa liquor that both of them are taken from cocoa bean naturally. People around the world really loves chocolate. As an information, dark chocolate is really good for our health.(general statement)
-Chocolate has it own special taste that can attract people to keep craving and admire it. Women really loves to eat chocolate as it has something that can be related to their health and beauty.(Thesis statement)
                 3rd step
MAIN POINT OF THE TOPIC.
The reason why women love to eat chocolate.
1. Chocolate can reduce acne.
2. Chocolate can tone down women’s stress and enhance their mood.
3. Chocolate can beautify human’s skin.
               4th step
CITATION:
Point no.1
-Citation no. 1: Cocoa contains flavanols or so called potent antioxidant that has a good effect on our skin as it might form a protective effect on it.
Citation: Aaron,&Bearden,(2008).
-Citation no. 2: Chocolate can cause acne is just a myth. Chocolate can reduce allergy, hence acne actually are caused by hormonal changes. Citation: Knight,(2000).
Point no.2
-Citation no. 1: Chocolate will give a “druglike” effect as it can reduce stress. Chocolate is a food that rich in carbohydrates, and it has been shown that chocolate can reduce stress and can keep people calm in the face of tense situation. Citation: Aaron,& Bearden,(2008).
- Citation no. 2:  Chocolate also contains caffein , caffein can result in either positive or negative effect on our mood. If we consume the caffein in right amount, it will release our tension. Citation: Knight,(2000).
Point no.3
-Citation no. 1: Cocoa contain flavanoil and their antioxidant action can increase blood flow to skin thus reduce water loss from skin and help moisturize it naturally. By using cocoa both externally and internally can improve the look and health of our skin.
Citation: Aaron,& Bearden,(2008).
             5th step
CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER:
1st point:
-Women really love chocolate because it  can reduce their acne.
-Citation no. 1: Cocoa contains flavanols or so called potent antioxidant that has a good effect on our skin as it might form a protective effect on it.
Citation: Aaron,& Bearden,(2008).
-Citation no. 2: Chocolate can cause acne is just a myth. Chocolate can reduce allergy, hence acne actually are caused by hormonal changes. Citation: Knight,(2000).
2nd point: 
-The next reason why women love to eat chocolate is because chocolate can tone down their stress and enhance their mood.
-Citation no. 1: Chocolate will give a “druglike” effect as it can reduce stress. Chocolate is a food that rich in carbohydrates, and it has been shown that chocolate can reduce stress and can keep people calm in the face of tense situation. Citation: Aaron,&Bearden,(2008).
- Citation no. 2:  Chocolate also contains caffein , caffein can result in either positive or negative effect on our mood. If we consume the caffein in right amount, it will release our tension. Citation: Knight,(2000).
3rd point:
-The last reason is because chocolate can beautify human’s skin.
-Citation no. 1: Cocoa contain flavanoil and their antioxidant action can increase blood flow to skin thus reduce water loss from skin and help moisturize it naturally. By using cocoa both externally and internally can improve the look and health of our skin.
Citation: Aaron, & Bearden,2008).

          6th step

REFERENCES:
1.Aaron,S.& Bearden,M.(2008). Chocolate A Healthy Passion.Amherst, New York.
   Prometheus Books
2.Knight,I.(Ed).(2000). Chocolate,Cocoa  Health and Nutrition. Great Britain.
   MPG Books Ltd,Bodmin,Cornwall.

   Last step